Tetsu no Shojo Jun

You know what your getting into with this story from seeing the name & the poster. This manga arrives across as though it's just a manga for an audience that has a fetish with muscular women, which is fine, only even then it offers very little of. Story - 3/10 - The concept is mediocre & the execution is rather poor. Even with the fact that the story moves through a lot of locations & characters, it still felt as if anything barely happens. Either there was an issue with the English translation I got my hands on or the dialogue is stiff & awkward. Attimes it had a the room (2003 movie) quality to it. I laughed at things not meant to-be laughed at & didn't laugh when it should be laughed at more often than not. If your going in to get you fetish fix, expect to be blue-balled (for the most part) all the way to the end. Characters - 3/10 - The characters are generic once you get pass the females in the story being more of a man mentally & (sometimes) physically than men in real life. It's the 'you could predict what's going to happen in each scene' levels of generic. Characters seemed to at times do/feel things because the story needs them to & the same for character progression (what little there's of it) as well; with some of the ludicrous decisions being how they went about a character that's named Satan (Which he tells the main two characters as if it's a normal nickname to have when trying to buddies with them). Not only is the dialogue stiff but also there are times where the character is giving dialogue that doesn't match the character. The main BUFF female talks as if she's an alien from outer-space at certain points. The writer of the manga thinks sinister means having a character laugh almost every word-bubble, which gets irritating at times. Art - 6/10 - There's not much to say here. I didn't notice anything overly wrong with the art on the manga other than how a cat was drawn in a panel. Overall, I got what I thought I was going to get & I'm still annoyed. I'd avoid this one if I were you.