Baby Lips

This is an incredibly short 11 page one shot about two female lovers having a quarrel. The art is plain ugly. The anatomy makes the characters look awkward and alien, and there are almost no backgrounds. The characters do act somewhat like normal people, but just barely. There is even less of a chance to care about these characters since we go through all the ups and downs of the quarrel in such a short span, and it ends up feeling incredibly rushed. This is a short review for a short one shot. I don't recommend this unless you really like overdramatic yuri stories. Just don'texpect to take much away from it.

I thought it was fine; writing was average, 11 pages, a small bit that was, "meh" overall it was alright but I wouldn't recommend someone goes out of their way to read it. Art was on the uglier side but mostly fine-ish but not worth going out of your way to read. The character personalities were, "meh" one noted and not all that enjoyable; I don't really care to see these two interact or do much at all considering all they play off of each other. The story isn't unique, predictable but inoffensive just meh. Not much to like or hate about it.