Enjokousai Bokumetsu Undou

Simple Plot, Straightforward, but It Fades Easily When I first picked this up, I thought I’d get a similar vibe to the artist’s other series, Koroshiya 1, but I quickly found a different tone. The story is easy to follow—it's about a group of teenagers who run scams on older men who exploit young girls, and another group that targets vulnerable teens with their schemes. Eventually, the two groups cross paths, and the story develops from there. It’s a simple premise, and while it’s enjoyable, I felt a bit empty after finishing it. Even though the plot ties everything together in the end, including small detailsfrom earlier on, I believe the author had the potential to make this short series feel more substantial. However, the downside of this promising premise lies in the artwork. The art doesn’t quite complement the strength of the plot, and the enjoyment occasionally dips due to inconsistencies in the proportions and character design. While the plot is straightforward, the character designs lack the distinctiveness needed to make each character feel lively and memorable. This might be why the story ultimately feels somewhat hollow to me. Overall, I picked this up because I admire Yamamoto Hideo’s Koroshiya 1. However, as another reviewer noted, it’s best not to approach this series with the same expectations. While this manga hints at the author’s potential, it ultimately feels underwhelming. That said, I’d still recommend giving it a read. It’s a single-volume story, making it easy to finish in one sitting, and the straightforward plot is simple enough to follow. If you’re someone who appreciates distinctive or polished artwork, this series might not fully satisfy you. However, if you enjoy following mature or seinen-style narratives, you may still find it enjoyable and worth exploring.