A Useless Villain

(There are tiny bits of element of spoiler but not big enough for them to really be spoilers, just a warning) Imagine if you had an idea for a story. You say to yourself : Wow, that sounds great, original and interesting. So then you decide to work with a decent artist to make a mahwa. It starts fine but as the story goes along you think : Dang, this needs even MORE action. The action is added but then you remember that there is an original idea! So you try to make shitty links between the action and the original idea, trying to make itmake sense! I think this is what was going in the head of the author. STORY: 2/10 Ahhhh, the main dish. The story! The story of A Useless villain starts off strong, looking promising and time worthy. As you keep reading, it becomes a HUGE mess with strings attached to it to not it them. The original idea of a villain stuck in a time loop get's ruined by random fights and the had of another main character. So now, you have to follow the story of not one BUT TWO people in one mahwa. No one signed for this. And for the cherry on top of the cake : The other main character is dumb and unlikable. His entire story just turns around the same circle almost the ENTIRE TIME. All of his actions maked me want to throw my phone to the other side of the PLANET. His character devellopement is barely present. But to return to our Main main character, his story tries badly to stay in the main original line (unlike the other whose story as landed somewhere in who knows where). May I had that at the last few chapters, an ENTIRE different side of story is shown as well as a new cast of characters? This is so unecessarry (unless there is a part 2 and that would explain it). The ending is just quickly made WITH RANDOM PLOT TWISTS? But yeah, the two on the rating is in memory of the original idea. RIP😞 CHARACTERS : 3/10 Our main character is pretty stubborn and the sudden character devellopement at the end was...uh random. Like bae, it's to late for that. Oh and, WE KNOW LIKE NOTHING OF HIS PAST. And the chapter right before the end, what do we get? A BACKSTORY. But the backstory was acting like we were supposed to know already the context. No guessing please. Give me context. AND DONT GIVE IT RIGHT BEFORE THE END. Well, now for our sudden main character. He is just dislikeable. He tries to do good stuff but HE NEVER COOPERATES. He is so dumb and wanna be all heroic and stuff it hurts my brain and eyes. All his actions always end up where it was last time. And all the random fights happen with him because HE IS DUMB AND USELESS. He ruined the story, if he wasnt there this story, maybe it would've gotten a 5/10. We also have a character that appeares in a few chapters across the mahwa but if useless was a person, it would be him. He tries to help but he just ruins everytime. Let's not forget the cast of characters that magically appear right at the end, no no! I saw them 2 chapters and I already can say that they should've stayed in the trash. Bland characters . Here you go take and try to enjoy. ART : 7/10 To say, the art on this is pretty good. Yes sometimes the proportions are a little bit weird, the backgrounds and the coloring are basic, it is still very enjoyable. In conclusion, the original idea was great but it kinda, went off the rails. The art is good and decent but it's not enough to carry the serie.