About How I'm Limp Down There

This is everything I want in a quick yaoi: it's funny, it's pretty, it's hot, and it's not 20 chapters long. Story: 10. Plot is simple but elegant. MC salaryman Tomoya can't get erect and is dumped by his gf, so his big bro sets I'm up with a massage therapist, Hayato, with the hopes they can help cure Tomoya's ED. It' successful, too successful. The themes in this are genuinely and believably sweet, not Splenda sweet but organic brown sugar with a hint of lavender sweet like you'd find in artisanal chocolate. Art: 10. Characters and backgrounds feel airy and light, very easy on the eyeswhile retaining enough contrasting line work and panelling to maintain visual engagement. Theres also clearly distinctive hairstyles for each character so if you're reading speed picks up character confusion shouldn't occur. Characters: 10. Tomboy is a meek, honest, innocent ditzy good guy. He approaches life with enthusiasm and curiosity. In essence he is a precious bean. Hayato is suave, skilled, and has an easygoing temperament tinged with realistic reservations about his newest romantic attraction. Smut: 10> The romantic and sexual pressure between them gradually comes to a gentle simmer followed by a controlled boil. I found myself feeling twinges of pleasure coursing though my body while reading the raunchy scenes. These scenes were visceral and heated. If I still wore glasses they'd have fogged up at all the steaminess.